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At the Mercy of the Flurries by Apolarburr17 (critique requested)

At the Mercy of the Flurries (critique requested)

Apolarburr17

The other vent poem for tonight. About work and snow and maybe a little more than that.

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    not trying to be an ass but baby blue on white is a bit hard to read-

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      I'll second this - I could barely read it at all. I sometimes have trouble with colour schemes myself as I'm colourblind, so I'm going to suggest this handy tool to the OP: https://webaim.org/resources/contrastchecker/

      I checked the sample above and it has a contrast ratio of only 1.3 : 1. The recommended contrast ratio is at least 7 : 1

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        Thank you. It did help and I adjusted the color choice to be easier to read

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          Oh yes, that's much better.

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      You’re fine, I appreciate the criticism, genuinely. I was going for a more snowy look with that color but I see what you mean. Made the blue darker to be easier to read, thank you.