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City Limits: First Year (Chapter 1) by Alkin (critique requested)

City Limits: First Year (Chapter 1) (critique requested)

Alkin

The first released chapter of my OC's narrative, City Limits.

It's full length. I'm sorry for some typos I made in the final publication, Chapters 2 and 3 will be more finalized for upload.

Chapters are clustered in a completely random order. Sometimes I'll only publish one at a time, sometimes I'll publish two or even three depending on how quickly I write them and just how I feel about breaking them up. :3

Please enjoy, and don't be afraid to leave me comments to let me know angles I can improve on! I don't generally write for publications, so I'm always open for tips. ^^

These documents can also be found on FurAffinity! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12511797/

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    +10 points to Weasyl for not requiring the work to be downloaded. :D

    Chapters 2-3 correct a lot of mistakes I noticed personally from format, but I'm curious as to what other people think need to be changed.