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The Big Bully! Typhlosion VS Emboar! by alcid34 (critique requested)

The Big Bully! Typhlosion VS Emboar!

The Big Bully! Typhlosion VS Emboar! - A short story by Alcid34

Matthew was a Typhlosion with big muscles who has a tendency to grow to an enormous size if anyone gets in his way, and because of that, he was crowned as the local city's protector against any people who was a threat to the city. The downside though, is that he sometimes destroys half the city, but the mayor wouldn't be mad at him. He was also famous for his muscly looks, every time he steps outside his home, all the Pokemon in his neighborhood (and sometimes, even the town) ran up to him so the Pokemon could touch his muscles. But today will be different for Matthew.

One day, he was at the city park, and after getting off the bus (and nearly burning the front off), he sat down in a bench where the fountain was. In this part of the park, most of the Pokemon who go to the playground don't really know who Matthew really was, and therefore, he was safe from the town's Pokemon. "Ahhh...At least I could take a break from being famous!" he told himself. The Typhlosion relaxed himself as he looked up into the blue endless sky. He finally went to sleep after relaxing long enough to tire himself out.

"Hey! Hey, you there!" a voice in his head told him. Immediately, Matt woke up to find a Emboar bigger than him, in front, looking angry. "You, get outta of my turf! Or I will force ya'!" he threatened Matt. "Oh? And why should I do that?" he told back, trying not to look at the bullying Emboar. "Because I'm king of this park! And you're not worthy of being in my turf!" he gloated. Matt ignored his last sentence, while trying to look away at him.

"Are you ignoring me?" he threatened Matt again, but again, the Typhlosion ignored his sentence. "Well then, if you're like that, why don't we fight? Right here, right now!" "Fine by me... but you'll wouldn't like it when you fight against me...." He told the Emboar. The big fire Pokemon took the first hit, and tried to punch Matt in the face. But just like a strong meditator, he grabbed on to the Emboar's hand, his face turned into a worried look. I didn't tell you this, but since Matt was muscular, he was also super strong. He grabbed the Emboar, and tossed him towards the air, and then gets ready. His hands burned like the flares of the Sun, and when the Emboar came back to Earth, Matt punched him as hard as he can, sending the Emboar towards a tree, and slamming hard into it.

Groaning from the impact, he looked up into Matt, still looking calm, while a drop of blood was dripping out of his nose. "Ugh...W-what are you g-going to do to me?" he groaned in pain. "See? I've told you not to fight against me... Now, face the consequences!" he screamed to the Emboar. He glowed brightly for a brief moment, nearly blinding the Emboar, and then faded out. The Emboar laughed at him weakly for that. "Heh..Heh...that's your consequence...You should be ashamed-" But he got cut off when the Typhlosion started growing slowly.

Matt became the size of a tree next to him, then the size of a small house, then the size of a building, then the size of a huge mountain, then the size taller than any mountain, even Mt. Everest.

He laughed and cackled in a deep and booming voice at the Emboar. "How do you like me now?" Matt said, his voice still deep and booming. "Would you like to fight me now?" The Emboar looks surprised, but persistence and perseverance prevented him from running away. "Why, Yeah! Yes I would!" he screamed. The Emboar stood up, ran towards the huge Pokemon, and punched his gigantic foot. Once again, Matt laughed boomingly, not feeling the punches brought by the Emboar. "Ha, Ha, Ha! You really think you're strong?" he said. Matt picked up the Emboar by the neck before he continued. "I really don't care what you do to me! Of course I'm strong!" The Emboar replied.

"I don't believe you." He told him. Matt lifted him over his mouth and opening it, immediately, his personality changed from being scary, to being scared himself from being eaten. "OK! OK! I'm sorry for what I did to you!" The Emboar whimpered with fear. Matt replied by closing his mouth and started talking, "You really think so?" he questioned. "Yes! Yes! I'll never bully you again!" he whimpered still. Matt thought about for a little bit. "Hmmm... OK, I'll spare you, but you'll promise not to bully me again?". "Uh- huh! I promise!" he told to the huge Pokemon. "OK, But you still have to face the consequences, I can't let this go unpunished." Matt said to the Emboar. And so, he started to whirl his arm around, and he kept whirling it until he released the Emboar, throwing him far away from the park, and from the city, screaming towards the horizon until he disappeared.

Matt was satisfied that the Emboar didn't harass him any longer and returned to his normal size. But his huge size, just like before, resulted in destroying the city once again. "Oh...I guess I did it again!" he told to himself. "Well, back to business as usual, I guess." He walked over to the bench, which was surprisingly intact, and sat down. Behind him was the fountain, now destroyed and a pile of rubble. "I may have destroyed everything, but at least I could finally relax..." He said before he closed his eyes and relaxed himself to sleep.

Matt is the protector of the city, with his enormous size and calm nature, I think he does a really good job in protecting and destroying the city at the same time!

The Big Bully! Typhlosion VS Emboar! (critique requested)

alcid34

A short story requested by utopiarayzexal in Furaffinity

A Muscley Typhlosion goes off to the city park and meets a bullying Emboar! Will the result be a walk in the park, or a disastrous loss?

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