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The Door Rp by ADragonSoulArt (critique requested)

The Door Rp (critique requested)

ADragonSoulArt

I AM FINALLY DONE WITH THIS!

I'm absolutely sick of working on this piece, i started it last week monday and i should of gotten it done last week Wednesday at the most X-X

but i am so glad i finally got this done because now i can go and draw whatever i want to now! i'm probably going to work on CapsLocks refrence sheet next.

Of course tho it was my character alone who took a day to Line, A day to color, a day to shade x-x you can probably see why.

Also, Free cookie/brownie/cake/whatever your favorite sweet is to whom ever can find the five hidden things, Three of them are super easy, last two Extremely hard.

Finally done with uploading all of my favorite pieces.

The lion character belongs to me.

the cat belongs to a friend im trying to convince to join.

the lynx belongs to my friend /\edfahmey

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    /\edfahmey

    I like The Sexy One ( ͡° u͡°)

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    /\edfahmey

    Onyx.

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      ADragonSoulArt

      Makes since.

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        /\edfahmey

        *sense

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          ADragonSoulArt

          but spell check had corrected me to Since! D:

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            /\edfahmey

            No. I am thy mighty 50. I know all, I see sense. Not since. F--- since.

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    Kai

    Five hidden things? You monster! Now I must find them.

    As for critique... I think it's a really cool piece, but it looks flat. The characters need to stand out from the background a bit more. And I think the background would be better if it were more varied, and not just the repetitive tree trunks. But it's still a really cool picture, and it sounds like you really worked hard on it. So good job :D

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      ADragonSoulArt

      hehe x3 good luck!

      And really thank you very much for the kind critique its been a really long time sense i have gotten one. And i do completely agree, making the characters pop and feel not quite so flat has always been something i've struggled with as well as making a more interesting/realistic and not so plane and flat background with the style iv chosen, i definitely still need to be experimenting around that's for sure.

      And i now realize that i had made it sound like in the description that i spent a really long time working on it when in reality i had just put off working on it for way to long. but it still had taken me a while mostly because of the lions armor.