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Saved. by Acedia (critique requested)

Saved. (critique requested)

Acedia

In school, he's bullied quite often, because he refuses to be usual, and humiliate the 'popular' students with his words. William can fight... slightly. Most are just random punches, and most of those random punches hit. The jocks being jocks though, they have coordination.

An unfortunate day rolled by, when Will was walking home. A few of the jocks seen him, and decided to... well, kick his ass. They succeeded, and them some. They went a tad overboard with the intentions of killing him if they weren't careful. Would have been another success, if Lucian hadn't been there--

FREEZE.

This was suppose to be a little short story, following William and Lucian, but I wouldn't feel right without my cousin. We both have our own little character's with a story behind it. Since my cousin has been busy lately, she couldn't really help that much with the little things with the story of ye' ole' William and Lucian. Perhaps later.

v_ v

On another note, can someone please tell me is there's anything wrong with this drawing? I think I did slightly terrible on the line art; The neck looks deformed, and so does the proportion on the eyes as well as the face/jaw/whatever. -- I tried to do something different, and give more shape to the face, but it ended up looking weird to me. <:I

Please and thank you~! <33

( I really wanted to put 'BitchGotFuckedUp' in the tags, but figured that was too much. <3 )

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