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The Fatty Dragon Picnic. by Nightshade_Gale (critique requested)

The Fatty Dragon Picnic
A story by Nightshade gale.
A gift story to Manian, my lovely mate.

It was a warm summer afternoon, It was a open field with a few trees in it.
It seems that at this place when it was the afternoon the grass on the ground was nice and soft, and not to mention shiny from the dew.
The sun was setting as there layed a big black and blue dragon,
This dragon was about 9 feet tall, and about 15 feet in length. He was no ordanary dragon as his element was plasma.
He was also quite the heafty dragon as he was flapping his wings slowly while he layed there.
His belly was hanging down to about his knees in his height.
He was told to meet someone there at this set of time.

"Geez... I wonder why she told me to come here..." He wispered to himself looking about for someone.

That someone was his girlfriend, or well as it seems to be, wasnt there at that time. So he thought that he
should just stand up and walk around for a bit. Till in about a few minutes later he saw a shadowy figure fly
to him. With the figure only bein shadow, he soonq uickly got onto his paws and looked at it in a defencive position.
He may have been kind, but he knew when he should be prepared for a supprize attack. As the shadowy figure flew closer
and closer, he soon relized the shape and color of the figure, Black and purple was the colors, with a tint of cyan on the claws.
The figure was quite round, or well plump shall we say, as it was flying to him. He got out of his defensive possition and sat down.
The figure soon reached him as he smiled and gave a happy rawr, running to the figure that landed near him as he huged it.
He was quite happy to see his girlfriend able to make it in this time.

"Nightshade!" Cried the black and blue dragon who just huged the figure.

The figure was indeed his girlfriend, Nightshade gale, A purple and black furred dragoness who has met him all becuase he
flew into her cave as she was cooking up some pizzas. It was a accident when the black and blue dragon flew into her cave
when he was tried. But nightshade, a quite heafty large belly upon her too, so it seemed that this couple was a cute,
heavy fat one who quite enjoyed each one's company. There was no denying that.

"Mani! Im glad to see you acutly stayed here while i was cooking our lunch!" Nightshade chuckled and licked his big fat cheek, as she smiled.

"Yeah, Im quite glad that you actuly stayed true to your words like normal!" Manian chuckled as well, and murring as she licked his cheek.
"So what did you bring for us to feast on, at this time of day?" Asked Manian as he sat down on hte soft dewed grass on the calm plain floor.

"I have brought us some of our favorite delights to eat, but theres much more than that! There is also Burgers, Ice cream, Soda, and some nice
and tasty ch-" Nightshade was saying before...

"CHILLI?!?!" Manian blurted out as she was saying that word.

Nightshade giggled and nosed him "Yes, and for desert, we have Red Velvet cake, since i know you love that as well~" Nightshade said as she placed
down the large iron-casted picnic basket she created her self for special times like this, It had big purple and blue hearts on the sides of it, as
she purred happily and soon opened it. As soon as she opened it, the smell of all of Manian's favorite recipies of his mate flowed out into the air
and right into their noses. Manian murred heavily as he smelt it, as Nightshade got out the traditional blanket on the ground, which she had made
herself as it was colored Purple and blue, which represented that of Manian and Nightshade was together, Like ying and yang. Before nightshade could
even place down the food on the blanket, Manian's belly soon rumbled from the smell of the food of which he loved so much, giving nightshade cute
puppy eyes to hurry up and place the food down on the blanket so they can eat.

"Hehe, you sure did come hungry today didnt you mani?" She chuckled lovingly and huged him before placing down all the food on the blanket.
There was multiple types of food on the blanket, Such as about 20 pizzas, all covered in topings that manian and her loved togeather. There were
even some nice tasty greasy cheese burgers on the blanket. About 50 of them were preasent, there would have been 70 if Manian didnt stuff 20 of them
into his maw instantly. This was proven since Manian's maw was covered in the melted cheese and grease that was present on the burgers. There were also
30 tubs of icecream on the large blanket as well, They were all nightshade's special recipie, where whenever you taste it, you taste your favorite flavor
in a instant, so you will never have to agrue about a type of icecream you want on your birthday or something to that extent. There was also about
160 gallons of their favorite soda so they can share, as well as there was two straws just to add to the romanticness. and about 60 barrels of manian's
favorite chili recipie that she has given him. But there was no Red Velvet cake on the blanket yet.

"Uhh.. Nightshade i thought you said you brought some red velvet cake..?" Manian asked and looked at her wiht a confused face.

"You will see laaaattteerr~" She chuckled before picking up a whole pizza and putting half in manian's maw and the other half into her maw.
Since the pizza was in both of their maws, they kissed and gulped down the pizza that was in their maws as they murred and hugged.

"Mmm~ Nightshade my dear, your pizzas seemed to get better every time i have them!" Murred Manian as he sat there and rubbed his big tummy.

"Thats good to know, thanks sweetheart~!" Purred nightshade as they hugged and ate on and on. The more they ate there the more their belly grew with
soft, and squishy blubber which of course, they loved to be as they were togeather. Their belly swelled on and on, they started out about 1 ton each
before this loving date. They were gaining about 50 pounds per slice of pizza, so you cna imagion how big they were swelling each pizza they enjoyed
togeather. By the time they finished everything that was there, they were about 50 tons each, and they were quite huge dragons togeather. Now about
90 feet wide in fatness on their bodies, they cuddled before nightshade brought out the delectable red velvet cake for manian and herself.

"Oh my gol.... That looks amazing nightshade!" Manian drooled a bit as he staired at the cake, clearly seeing its tecture and look, "May i lick a bit
of the icing?" Manian begged a bit, since it was his favorite type of cake.

"Oh suuuure!" Chuckled nightshade as she held one of the cakes to him. Manian leaned in and licked a bit of the red and white icing on a corner, as
he murred from how sweet the icing is.

"Mmmmm! Geez Nightshade! Your icing always gets sweeter every lick i have!" Manian murred even more louder as he hugsmooshed her into a nice blubbery hug.

Now, what was on the red velvet cake that made manian freak out? Well, it was a nice picture she made of them cuddling wiht a heart above their head.

But since the cakes were out, nightshade kept the picture of course, but apperently manian couldent wait to eat these cakes as he just lowered his
head into the cakes and chomped them quickly, his belly swelling about 1 ton each bite he made. Not to mention Manian was enjoying every little bite of
the cakes! He would not stop chomping on htem as tehre were about 100 of them each. He was loving just the taste, texture, without even relizing what
was happening to him. After he ate every cake that was there, he was about 16872 tons of blubber, all in that one dragon! He murred lovingly as he
layed there with him being stuffed there, like a big fat pig. Nightshade chuckled as she looked at her large love, massaging his big stuffed gurgly and
sloshy gut of his. Manian soon let out quite the earthshaking belch from the massages as his tummy was gurling downt ehc akes quite loudly. Of course,
Nightshade was enjoying quite nicely, she always liked burps and the tummy noises of manian, not to mention he was loving it when nightshade always
gives him nice large portions of food, and loving attention.

"Hehe, Mani, have you noticed what happened to you?" Chuckled nightshade as she snuggles him happily.

"No i havent my sha-UUUUUURRRP!" Interupted a belch from manian's maw as he was speaking, he was blushing as he looked over himself, rubbing his belly
softly, it almost looked like he ate a entire town! He murred lovingly as he just sat on his big fat rump, which was about 50 to 60 feet round of blubber.
Of course it was really toasty in all of that blubber on him to keep him warm, he wobbled softly to signal to nightshade, that he loved her because
the patttern he wobbled in was a nice loving heart to her. She smiled as her belly glowed a faint loving purple to him since it was almost night time,
and manian's belly glew a nice faint loving cyan to nightshade as well.

Ever since that date they seen eachother daily with quite alot of food and love, and this is one of their most memberable dates wiht each other. They
always try to have a picnic atleast once a week to remember what has happened today, but who can say they will fit it like normal anyway. But since then,
they have loved eachother more and mroe till they became mates. Which is another story to be told another day, al i will end off wit, is they lived
happily, and very fatty ever after.

The Fatty Dragon Picnic. (critique requested)

Nightshade_Gale

This is a story i felt like making for me and my mate, manian. I hope you enjoy it mani!

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