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Working on my sequentials again.
I'm really, really proud of this so far because this little comic is pretty much targeting all of the areas I'm weak in.
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Thank you so much! Pacing was something that I was weak in when I drew my last comic so I've tried to keep the flow constant with this go. I was a little worried about how the characters blended in with the rest of the set but I didn't really know how to fix it. I'll definitely take your advice and start varying my line weights more. I really appreciate that you took the time to look this over for me.
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I can't wait to see what you do next!
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Thank you! I'm hoping the next comic I put up is going to be an original story, I've got some ideas that I'm messing with at the moment.
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kingcoyote
I think the paneling flows pretty well and it's fairly clear what's happening so far, which is super important. The characters kind of blend in with the background a little bit, though. Have you considered using a variance in line weights? For example: using a size 8 brush for outlines, and then doing the detail lines in a size 5 or 6 brush? Having a thicker outline on your characters would really make them pop.
Lookin good! Keep on comic-ing!