Sign In

Close
Forgot your password? No account yet?

Standing About by se05239 (critique requested)

Standing About (critique requested)

se05239

CJ1771 standing about. I am not too fond of his right arm.

Submission Information

Views:
495
Comments:
2
Favorites:
2
Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

Comments

  • Link

    Really cool designs you make man :D

    Critique:
    To fix that arm, I believe it might be slightly too long, try to shorten it out a bit. Also I would suggest to make the wrist more obvious by maybe tapering the forearm a bit. That will make more clear where the arm ends and the hand starts.
    The rest of the figure seems really nice. I really like the pose and the colors, good job :D

    • Link

      The arm itself was actually shorter but I didn't like that, so I corrected and ended up with this. Decided to not bother "over-correcting" it, as it'd take all day and weekend.