Sign In

Close
Forgot your password? No account yet?

[Comm] Wrong Turn! by Alcho

[Comm] Wrong Turn!

Alcho

First off, I'd like to throw this out there that this has been the most rewarding piece I've worked on to date, and I think it reflects that!

Commission for the wonderful number01hunter on FA! Of his characters Amy (left) and Hunter (right) exploring an abandoned (so they thought) asylum! They turned a corner and were met by a wall of eerie fog, causing them to stop their exploration. As the fog began to move onward with a gust of air that came from a broken window, Amy let out a terrified scream! Hunter quickly turned to her to see what was wrong, but before he knew it, she grabbed him and shoved him in front of her - turning his head forward to the mist he quickly realized why.... A large, lanky arm and pale hand protruded from the mist with a light growl coming from behind it - Hunter had no time to scream as the hand grew closer to his snout, he raised his hands in defense, hoping to deter the creature, or at least minimize the damage he imagined it would cause!

As the hand drew closer, a noise rang from down the hall - and a voice reacted,"Quick, pull up the cameras on the laptop!".
The hand stopped, the creature's face that was still shrouded mostly in darkness snarled, "Noisy... shhhhhh.... You two, quiet.... Leave." It then retracted it's arm from Hunter's face, and disappeared into the darkness of the mist... hunting the other voices...
Amy whispered to hunter, her voice trembling uncontrollably "We need to go, Hunter. We NEED to go NOW."
Hunter turned and hugged Amy, making sure she wasn't hurt, "I've never agreed as much, let's go."
The two retraced their steps until they finally got to the entrance of the asylum and ran as fast as they could. Once safe outside, they looked back and heard a terrified scream from two individuals still inside that sent chills down their spines. They hugged once more and made their way back to their home, never forgetting the experience that almost ended the both of them...

Hunter and Amy both belong to number01hunter on FA
The unnamed Crazy Character belongs to alcho
Very Short Story by alcho
Art by alcho

Submission Information

Views:
753
Comments:
0
Favorites:
1
Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital