The Snail by Irbis (critique requested)

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The Snail (critique requested)

Irbis

December 26, 2015 at 17:21:48 UTC

Another Patreon poem. :) It's right here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/3858785

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Views:: 874
Comments:: 7
Favorites:: 1
Rating:: General
Category:: Literary / Poetry / Lyrics

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Ouros on December 27, 2015 at 02:17:45 UTC

Aww, poor snail! :( I'm calling the police now!
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  Irbis on December 27, 2015 at 02:35:39 UTC
  
  wtf
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    Ouros on December 27, 2015 at 11:58:27 UTC
    
    Indeed, my friend... indeed... :(
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      Irbis on December 27, 2015 at 15:34:44 UTC
      
      You're weird. xD
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        Ouros on December 27, 2015 at 22:11:18 UTC
        
        All the way! :P
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Silent-Hunter on December 27, 2015 at 04:05:50 UTC

Beautiful poem. <3
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  Irbis on December 27, 2015 at 04:34:09 UTC
  
  Thanks. :)