I was looking back over my submissions the other day, and I noticed that my out out seems to have slowed to a crawl. I'm probably making it sound worse than it is, but I suppose I shouldn't be too worried. I feel like I've gotten a lot better at writing, but as a result I've gotten much slower at it too. I spend more time slowly poking through the grammar and structure and flow than I used to. Like, I used to do most of my writing as a flow of consciousness thing, and sometimes I still do that, but I spend a lot of time thinking about how other people read it. Like, I am trying to get at working on expanding on the setting and characters a bit. Other people can't read my mind. People can't just see what I see. I have to slowly walk them through it. Basically I've been trying yo be better about describing settings and people as opposed to just actions. Sometimes I still skip those parts because it's not always important to the scene.

Any who I need a break. I'm eexhausted as hell, but I've got some comms I need to wrap up first, and I'm still behind on my Patreon obligations. -_- I need yo stop giving myself more work when I can't even handle the current workload I have.

On the plus side I'm getting close to wrapping up the next AA and then I will hopefully finish the Patreon fic relatively quickly. I'd love to have both done by the 24th because I am so hyped for bloodborne and would love to be able to take some time off and enjoy it.

Oh yeah. If anyone wants to suggest some character names for the dudes in the next Patreon fic go ahead and say some. I feel like I could use more New names.