I could use some more feedback on the first chapter of "Island of Mist", so if you're interested in reading, you can see it here >>> https://www.weasyl.com/submission/755082/island-of-mist-re

Synopsis:
"Life has always been easy for Sato, a quiet, sixteen-year-old farmer with casual aspirations of becoming a soldier. He’s heard his neighbors’ second-hand tales of monsters and magic, spawned by the supernatural fog known as the Mist and its debilitating Madness that protects his island home from the outside world. But Sato doesn’t believe those stories... that is until the night that his little sister chases a fairy into the forbidden Fairy’s Forest.

"Can Sato overcome his fear and doubt and protect his family from the threats he is about to face, or will he be consumed by them?"