So I've finished posting Book I of Beta in Equestria.
I'd really love some feedback on what everyone thought.
Book II is looking to be at least 28 chapters long. I'm on 24 right now, with at least 5 more chapters. I may even break 30.
That 's partially because my chapters are smaller at the moment, than Book I. After I'm done editing, that is sure to change.

SO.. yeah feedback PLEASE! :)