I'm nearing the end of finishing the revision to A Bully Story, and by end, I probably mean a couple more months at this pace. >.< Still, I want to get some eyes on it and hear what people think. Hopefully, clean it up a bit and stamp out any offensive grammar errors.

Once I can find enough time, expect a huge upload of chapters. Really looking for criticism on:
-Characters: development, do they feel stale or flat?, anything you like or don't like about them
-Flow: too slow, not fast enough, parts that lag or need more detail, chapters too long or short, etc...
-Is everything consistent?
-Does it get confusing who is talking/being talked about/the focus?
-Do the events in the story make sense? Are they believable? Does any part just not seem to fit?