We're storyboarding for some reason in class (gameart class... I guess for cutscenes?) and I dont think this teacher knows what she is doing

Here is the first half of the storyboard https://24.media.tumblr.com/b01910dc6b7b343b74fd3149f46468c5/tumblr_n0r58mEKBE1rouco5o1_1280.png

Anyone have a critique on what it should really look like or be like? This is fine to turn in but for my personal knowledge I'd like to know how to do it right.