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The story of Midnight Star Kal'kina by midkantakina

I actually wrote a lifestory type thing that is on my furaffinity account in scraps and it sort of jumped between years since I am not that good a writer to really focus on one thing or the other. for 2 or more chapters, and I have re-written the story several times before to fit things in and make a few things a little more real in what would happen. One thing I wrote in was that her mother was a humanoid succubus and her father a fallen angel. I never did write how they met but wrote a prologue of them on the run while she was close to giving birth to Mids.

The reasoning was that the love was forbidden because of what they were, though wondering in my head now of why would they just now be running?

Also they come across an amazon queen venturing out with her guards who takes them in, and the mother has her there. She is left with the amazon queen to raise as her own with the inability to learn that she is magical in nature while they leave and go back on the run.

I figure any passing otherworldly creatures hunting for them would sense her small energy signature, but what would be a valid reason of leaving a baby who is a succubus and angel hybrid alone and alive?

Some other big things here that I wrote. She discovers and practices her abilities a few times outside the boundaries of the amazon tribe she was left with, and a young demon finds her. He doesn't harm her but warns her of other demons that might be hunting around the area. This leads to him watching over her from the shadows.

When they get older they fall in love but get found, and seeing as she is hybrid and he a regular demon and the love being fobidden the hunter is just going to kill her lvoe, but not her, and when she tries to defend...what I wrote here I am forever unsure if this can happen...the hunter stabs her low enough to where her uterus would be, and though Mids has the ability to heal she is rendered unable to bare children for a long time. Also her love gets killed but she is left alone.

See where I am going here? Need a valid reasoning for her not being harmed as well as an actually wound or reason she is unable to give birth for a long time.

Also... Something I have been goofing with. Seeing as a couple of friends have adopted Mids as a sort of sister on Furcadia (yes I go there) They have based their cubi characters off of DMFA lore. One is even in the clan of Hope. Messing with somehow writing Mids as somehow in that lore but still keeping her as sort of a princess and have her own clan name and marking...

So yeah. Ideas, feedback of things, good idea/bad idea of being apart of the DMFA type thing.....

The story of Midnight Star Kal'kina

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    Trying a few things here...

    A valid reason for not being harmed - could it be that she's actually immortal? Some mythical creatures are, depending on the universe. Perhaps she was able to hide wherever she was and escape detection. Maybe she ran away and was forgotten.

    It is possible for abdominal trauma to wreck the ability to bear children, damaging the reproductive organs. Perhaps by the nature of the weapon, a special weapon, it cauterized the wound and made restoration of function impossible without a very skilled intervention?

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    Sounds good yeah.