first terms of service by Zyonji

I wrote my first terms of service today: http://zyonji.de/art/tos.html
Does anyone have some thoughts on that, or might spot any questionable points? I appreciate all the help I can get (:

first terms of service

Zyonji

4 December 2016 at 17:10:47 MST

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    Besides a few spelling errors, I notice that you said payment would be required as soon as the price and layout was decided; but further down, you state that the first payment will be made after a draft is complete, which is a bit confusing. Aside from that, everything else looks good!

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      Thank you very much! I changed both to draft now, that should make it more clear (: