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gryphon in grayscale by EmilyThePenguin (critique requested)

gryphon in grayscale (critique requested)

EmilyThePenguin

thoughts?

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    Oh this is really cool! A little different from what you usually do, but still looks great.

    Hmm... a critique. I think the gryphon itself looks good, with the subtle shading on the beak and chin- but I'm not too big of a fan of the background. I know the background was probably a last minute addition, so I don't think it's too bad in that sense, but I think that's the thing. It looks a little tacked on, perhaps if you could place your beast within the setting it would work better together.

    I also think the feathers on the wing are placed a little incorrectly, but I'd probably have to see the full wing to be the full judge of that. I recommend looking online at pictures of bird wings and similar things if you wanted to fix that.

    But overall I think this is a very nice picture and it still rings very true to your style!

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      yeah, I delve into a bunch of different stuff... I'm bombarding Weasyl with YEARS worth of art in just under a week

      eh, I probably should've spent more time on the background... not my strong suit, so thank you!

      I ought to have referenced a photo instead of other drawings.. aw well o:

      but once again, thanks for taking the time to critique c: