Critique requested, so, I'll give it my best shot :3
I wanna say first off I love your lineart, you have an eye for line width and weight that not many have. Even I'm bad at it. Working with thick lines in such a way is really impressive to me so you have my respect on that, ahaha. My only thought on the lineart is that you may want to try and sharpen the round edges, specifically on the horns and certain detailings on the body.
Anatomy-wise you've actually done a pretty good job at translating the human form mixed with the elongated body of a dragon. Though the wings feel like a bit of an afterthought, they should connect to the shoulderblades. They appear to be on a different angle than the rest of the body, and one has shading where the rest of the image is flat...? Also, this might be more of a personal thing, but I feel the hands should be bigger to match the rest of the body.
I like your choice of color, as well. I can't say much else, though, if you were considering changing something, I'd maybe make the earrings purple? Or blue? Just to accent the face. Or use a brighter shade of gold. Again, more of a personal thing here, I just think it'd look nice and add something that brought attention to the head.
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Critique requested, so, I'll give it my best shot :3
I wanna say first off I love your lineart, you have an eye for line width and weight that not many have. Even I'm bad at it. Working with thick lines in such a way is really impressive to me so you have my respect on that, ahaha. My only thought on the lineart is that you may want to try and sharpen the round edges, specifically on the horns and certain detailings on the body.
Anatomy-wise you've actually done a pretty good job at translating the human form mixed with the elongated body of a dragon. Though the wings feel like a bit of an afterthought, they should connect to the shoulderblades. They appear to be on a different angle than the rest of the body, and one has shading where the rest of the image is flat...? Also, this might be more of a personal thing, but I feel the hands should be bigger to match the rest of the body.
I like your choice of color, as well. I can't say much else, though, if you were considering changing something, I'd maybe make the earrings purple? Or blue? Just to accent the face. Or use a brighter shade of gold. Again, more of a personal thing here, I just think it'd look nice and add something that brought attention to the head.