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The Proginers: Invasion from the East by wwwolf (critique requested)

The Proginers: Invasion from the East (critique requested)

wwwolf

You'd think by now they would have earned their happy ever after.

The world is saved, the beast known as Brian is dead, and V-town should be safe. Tommy and Rebecca have earned their time. They've even taken that honeymoon.

But it's never that easy. The city doesn't stand still, and Tommy's already on to the next challenge, but he's still got his friends to back him up.

Brian may be dead, but some problems have a way of haunting you, even from beyond the grave...

Don't have a clue what's going on? Welcome to the hunt. Start with the first book!

Great new cover curtsey of Negger

Comments and critiques are welcome.

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    I'm enjoying this! I jumped right in with this book rather than start at the beginning, and you've done a good job of making things clear for new readers. (I will go back and read the rest!)

    Ah, you might want to change:

    Until he met you he was going under the pudendum of James Wolfram

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      It's great to know someone is reading here. :-)

      Thanks for the compliment, much appreciated.

      Hmm… I'll have to see how Weasyl handles reuploads. I'll fix the typo in my copy, but the change may never make its way up. Thanks for pointing it out!

      Hope you enjoy the rest of The Proginers!

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        It's great that people are posting here :) I like Weasyl's format and it seems a friendly site on the whole.

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          The site does looks well made on a technical level, but I haven’t seen enough of the community to really say much more.

          Sadly, its got an uphill battle against the behemoth.