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Examination by wwwolf (critique requested)

Examination (critique requested)

wwwolf

Jonathan is a good boy, he did his duty.
Once the pride of the Police Service, now little more than an outcast, exiled to a tiny village just south of the Scottish boarder, the Police Dog has come to accept his fate, and find a family willing to accept him. A family he'll fight to defend.
But fate is rarely so kind. The Dog's remaining secrets are on the verge of discovery and his life hangs in the balance as new powers enter play to rip asunder his remaining loyalties.

This is a sequel to my earlier work Police Dog.

A big thanks to Da Boz for the awesome cover art.
And an equally big shoutout to Friday/Dandin for leaping into the breach and helping me whip my writing into shape. Any improvements are thanks to him, and any remaining typos are completely my own fault!

Feedback and critique is more than welcome.

And here, folks, we reach the end.

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    Hey, it's a big world you've created here. Could be room for some short stories, even if Jonathan and his friends are having a well-earned rest for now :)

    Thank you so much for writing and posting all this!

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      And thank you for reading! Hope you enjoyed as much as I did creating it.

      Right now I've yet to create any short stories, but a few other authors either cameo Forty-Two in their own stories, or use him as inspiration. Once of those stories even saw print!

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        I'll look out for that!

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    I love how Forty-Two changed throughout the two books and became who he is at the end of this book. This is possibly the best book of yours I've read (granted I've read three but that's still something, right? XD) I really like your work and am looking forward to read more. Keep it up and have a good whatever the time you're reading this at :3