Sup - commission for HeWhoIsJack by wizerdwolf (critique requested)

Sup - commission for HeWhoIsJack

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Wizerd Tundrus Reference Sheet by Defiance - [NOT MY ART]

Sup - commission for HeWhoIsJack (critique requested)

wizerdwolf

May 21, 2014 at 22:12:20 UTC

Yeah, I know, it took me a while to get to it ;w; forgiiiiive meeeeeeeee~<3
Anyway, this foxeh belongs to https://www.weasyl.com/~hewhoisjack

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Category:: Visual / Digital

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CimmehServal on May 21, 2014 at 23:42:02 UTC

This is great! All that I nitpick at is the left of the torso, the trench coat, doesn't seem to have enough depth. Don't quote me though, I'm not professional :P
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  wizerdwolf on May 23, 2014 at 01:21:34 UTC
  
  Thanks! Can you tell me what I could've done to give it more depth possibly?
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    CimmehServal on May 23, 2014 at 03:22:23 UTC
    
    Placing of lighting is very important. You can only really perfect it with practise. Try to pinpoint exactly where the lighting is in the picture.
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      wizerdwolf on May 23, 2014 at 18:47:29 UTC
      
      Pics like this, I generally originate the light top left and in front of the character (off screen). How would I add more depth to that part of the picture though?