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A Huge Crush by Windwaker407 (critique requested)

Days were rather practical in the life of this small katishi. Pretty much all he did was go to school, surf the web, play video games, and sleep. It was always the same, boring litany, day in and day out. He longed for something new, something exciting, something different.... but what?
It was Friday, and Adam was in the middle of another dull day. He wasn't very social, he didn't really know many people, he always focused more on school then anything. He only knew few people, but never even reached out to them.
School was already half over. Adam was walking through the mostly empty hall, reading a book as he walked, a bad habit of his, he was usually very careful though. He had bumped into something huge, falling backwards. “Oh, I'm sorry, I wasn't paying attention.” He apologized, looking up. What he saw had stunned him. It was just an anthro lizard... but he was absolutely huge. He stood a good seven and a half feet, dwarfing the tiny katishi who had only been about barely five feet himself. Height wasn't the only thing the lizard had over him, the lizard also seemed to be very fat as well. He had a huge belly the sagged well over the front of his pants, it looked very big and round, and even jiggled a bit, he also had a rather noticeable set of moobs that rested on his huge belly somewhat. The lizard had huge hips as well, easily twice, maybe three times the width of Adam's. From what Adam had seen just a second ago, the lizard's giant posterior was also very large, both cheeks looking big enough to engulf his head. His thighs were also very chunky, each one about as big as Adam's whole body is around. He looked down on the katishi, he had beautiful, and alluring green eyes that shown concern. He seemed to be a green color, with a paler shade on his huge belly. He had a thick, sort of short tail.
Adam was amazed by the giant before him, so shocked he did not hear the lizards question. “I said, are you alright?” His question rang again, his green eyes showing concern, but also a bit of amusement.
Adam shook his head to clear his mind before starting to pick up what he had dropped in the collision. “Oh, I'm fine, I'm so sorry about bumping into you. “He said, getting to his feet.
The lizard smiled, helping him up. “Hey, no problem. My name is Eric.” He said, giving a polite smile and extending his hand.
Adam blushed a little, shaking it. “M-my name is Adam.” He said timidly. For some reason he felt very nervous, and it wasn't just out of intimidation. He didn't know how to react. He was standing before a hulking figure that could easily squash him... yet he liked the idea of it oddly.
Eric chuckled a little, ruffling Adam's hair a bit. “Well I'll see you around sometime?” He asked, smiling sincerely. Adam could only nod softly. The lizard smiled a bit. “Great, see you later then.” He said, before walking away, leaving Adam to think for a moment. Something new just started... and he knew that.

The rest of school that day had been pretty boring either way, not much going on after his meeting with Eric. He eventually just went home and just surfed the internet until he got tired, falling asleep at the computer desk. He had dreams that night, strange dreams, ones that he rarely had. He tried to keep from having these dreams, but this one was about someone in particular. It was about Eric... Everything was so confusing, why was he dreaming about Eric... then again, every time he had these strange dreams, it included people with that body type. Tall, chubby, much bigger than him in every way. What was it that made him have these dreams.
Adam soon enough woke up, looking at the clock, it was about ten in the morning already. Adam yawned and stood up, making his way to the door. As he looked around for breakfast he soon conclude there was nothing there. He would have to go to the store to get something to eat. The katishi went to get dressed, wearing his usual blue hoodie, and some jeans. That was really what he wore most of the time.

Adam was walking along the side of the road, the weather was not quite warm yet, there was still a coolness to it. He liked it when it was cool. It was relaxing, calming even. Sometimes he would just take these walks to clear his head. It helped when he was feeling stressed or confused. Just taking in the fresh air made him relax. In fact, he was already forgetting about his dream from earlier.
Soon enough Adam made his way to a park. He wasn't planning on stopping on the way, but on such a beautiful day, he thought 'Why not?' And went on ahead. It was a large park, there weren't any furs there today. He decided to walk around the park, enjoying the scenery. It was very nice, he sat down on the bench to relax from all the walking. It really kept him busy that's for sure. It was better than just sitting at a computer screen all day. He smiled and closed his eyes, taking in his surroundings.
He was so relaxed, he just stayed like that for a few minutes. Not really paying attention. Suddenly he felt something hugs on top of him, instantly opening his eyes. Something was right on top of him, mostly in his lap. It seemed heavy, but also very soft, after a few seconds, he realized it was a fur. No, not a fur, a scaley.
A few seconds later, the mystery creature got up, looking behind him. “Oh my! I'm so sorry, I didn't notice you there... wait...are you... Adam was it?” He asked, looking down.
Adam couldn't believe it, it was that lizard from school, Eric. “Oh my, I.. uhh...” He blushed a little, mortified. Had he just been sat on? This was extremely embarrassing for him. Mostly because of his... enjoyment of it. He enjoyed it? How can that be? He was just a normal fur, living a mundane life. But this was so unusual. He looked up, feeling even more nervous than before..
Eric just chuckled a little, sitting back down, next to him this time. “S-sorry about that, I should really pay attention to what I'm doing. I hope I didn't crush you too badly.” He joked, smiling a little
Adam calmed down a little, smiling as well. “I...I'm fine, don't worry about it.” He smiled, nodding reassuringly. “W-wow, you are huge compared to me though.” He said nervously.
Eric chuckled a little, looking down at his own body, patting a paw on his huge belly, jiggling it a little. “Yeah, I suppose, I love my sweets after all.” He smiled a little. He didn't seem embarrassed about it at least, that was good. “In fact, I like being big, it's kind of fun, though most people 'round here seem to not like big people... I'm guessing that cute little blush means you do?” He said.
Adam blushed heavier than before, putting his hands on his face to try and hide it. “I-I-I don't know what you're talking about.” He said quickly.
The lizard laughed, gently ruffling his hair. “I can see it in your eyes, I can notice these things easily, you don't react with disgust, or the kind of fear most do. But you don't have to admit it if you don't want to.” Adam was blushing bright red. “Okay, I'm sorry, I shouldn’t have said anything, I'll just go.” He said getting up.
Adam quickly got to his feet. “N-no! It's okay, you can stay.” He said, smiling a little timorously. He felt some sort of odd connection to this lizard.
Eric smiled, walking back over to the katishi, giving him a hug. “Heh, thanks, I'm glad.” He said with a gentle smile. With the size difference, Adam only barely reached up to his chest, meaning his face would be shoved right in between his huge moobs, his body squished against the lizards big tummy. Before he noticed, his heart was racing, his body felt hot, he had no idea what to say or do next. Was this what it felt like to really like someone? What it felt like to have a crush? Adam was blushing madly. Eric chuckled a little, rubbing along the katishi's back. “You wanna go back to my place?” He asked nonchalantly.
The little katishi looked up, blushing. “R-really? Okay, if you want to.” He said, almost not even realizing what he was saying. He would be going home with this behemoth, both of them alone. He wiped a bit of sweat off of his forehead..
The huge lizard smiled, nodding. “Great, follow me then, just a warning, I'm a bit of a flirt.” He teased, Adam wasn't sure if he was joking or not. Eric started walking along the path. Adam wasn't slow to follow, he quickly came up beside him. They walked for a little while, mostly silent for a few minutes.
Adam eventually spoke a question on his mind since he was sat on. “H...how much do you weigh Eric?” He asked, just coming out and saying it..
Eric didn't seem at all offended, in fact he even chuckled. “I can't remember, somewhere between 750 and 800 lbs.” He said, slapping his belly which jiggled a bit.
Adam blushed a little, watching his belly with fascination. “W-wow, that is a lot. Not that I mind of course.” He said, blushing a little more as he looked down. “I'm surprised I survived under your gargantuan rump.” He said with a light chuckle.
Eric laughed. “Yeah, I bet not many people could survive someone like me sitting on them. I should sit on you more often.” He snickered, but not entirely joking.
Adam blushed a little, nodding slightly. “Y-yeah, I suppose so.” He said, not really sure he was serious, thinking it was just a joke. He chuckled. “Maybe you could even crush me with your belly.” He said, before blushing madly. 'Why would you say that!' He shouted in his mind, blushing a little. “N-no! I didn’t mean that! I.. I'm sorry! I... I...” He was stopped as the lizard put a finger to his lips.
“It's alright, I fully understand.” He said, but left it ambiguously, not stating exactly what he understood. Did he really understand what he was saying? Or understand something the katishi didn't. It was all so confusing. “Let's just keep walking alright?” He suggested with a smile. Adam nodded briefly, following behind him.

They eventually made it back to Eric's place. It didn't seem that long to Adam, of course he was mesmerized by the lizards huge posterior as he walked behind him. Once Eric decided to make a little joke and fart while Adam was right behind him. Adam blushed a little, he... didn't hate it. It stunk yeah, and it was gross... but he didn't feel disgust in it... could he have liked it?
As the huge lizard made it to the right house, he abruptly stopped. Adam who was too mesmerized to see it fast enough walked right into Eric's rear. Blushing, Adam backed away, looking up. “Well, I know you like my ass but calm yourself.” He teased, wiggling his butt in Adam's face, making him look completely flustered. “Hey, it's alright, I'm only teasing, why don't we go inside.” He said, smiling a little. He went up and opened the door, leading Adam inside.
The house looked pretty messy. A lot of food wrappers and fast food bags lying around. It didn't seem like a total pigsty though, you could walk around pretty easily, the house wasn't crawling with bugs. He didn't seem to be a total slob, but was very messy and disorganized. A lot of laundry strewn all over the place. The house did have a particular smell to it. It wasn't intolerable, but it did stink in there. A sort of strong musky stench that filled the air.
“Welcome to my home, it's not the cleanest, but it's livable you know, I like it.” He chuckled a little. “You can get comfortable, that's what I'll do.” He said, chuckling a bit. He grabbed his shirt, slowly starting to lift it up, taking his shirt off. Adam blushed a little, not sure if he looked up. Eric chuckled a little. “What? If I am going to be in my own home, I'm going to make myself comfortable.” He said, flopping his huge ass on the couch. “You're lucky I didn't remove my pants too... unless you want that~” He said, teasing again. Adam blushed a deep shade of red, but decided to ignore that comment, it sounded like a joke but with Eric, he wasn't sure.
Adam was staring at the lizard as he went shirtless. His huge belly rested in his lap. It was glistening with a little sweat from all that walking. He was sitting with his arms behind his head, smiling smugly. His pits were also a bit sweaty, and from how close Adam was, he could tell it also had a strong musk to it. Adam's heart was racing even faster now, it was beating a mile a minute. He was just gazing on the giant lizard, his huge belly, and his natural musk filling the air. Why was he feeling these feelings! He shouldn't be feeling them! It's wrong... isn't it?
Eric had noticed Adam's confliction with himself. He smiled a little, grabbing the katishi by the arm and tugging him over to the couch with him. “Hey, it's fine, you don't need to worry about it.” He said, placing an arm around the lapine like creature. Adam had found himself pulled close, squishing to the lizards side a little, his head very close to his armpit. He had started to squirm a little. Eric, with no hesitation, soon enough had grabbed the katishi, shoving his face in his pit, then lowered his arm, trapping Adam in there.
Adam blushed madly, trying hard to squirm away. His snout was rubbing right into the sweat and stink of his pit. The smell was powerful when his nose was shove right up in the source. Yet the thing was, even though he knew it stank, even though he knew it was supposed to be gross.... he... he liked it... a lot.
He eventually found himself pulled back out of the pit, gasping. His hair was all messed up, his eyes were wide, he looked frozen. Once he recovered, he looked up at the lizard, growling a little bit. “W-what was that for!” He asked, not angry but confused.
Eric smirked, pulling Adam up on his lap, wrapping both flabby arms around him, holding him close, making Adam blush. “Listen, I can see it in your eyes, you actions. You can hide it very well, but I have been able to see you. You hide it so well, you even hid it from yourself.. You like this, you love it. I know you do, I am absolutely confident of it. You want someone big like me, you love it, but you don't want to love it, and don't know how.” He said, smiling as he looked down at the katishi's face which was turning a bright red. Eric smiled, leaning forward, and tenderly kissed him on the lips. Adam blushed madly, staying still, frozen once again. After a few moments, he pulled away, smiling down at him. “I can tell you feel alone in this world, and you want someone to depend on, someone to care for as the care for you as well. I have felt the same way for a long time. In this town, it is rare to find anyone who actually likes someone as huge and fat as me.” He smiled, moving Adam's bang fringe out of his eyes. “I can be that person for you, and you can be that one for me. The only problem is you can't come to terms with what you feel. You want to enjoy it, but you won't let yourself. And I'll make sure you get want you want deep down, even if I have to force you.” He chuckled a little.
Adam was not sure how to respond. What should he say? What should he do? It was all so confusing. He couldn't possibly like it could he? Would it really be possible? He had so much doubt swimming in his mind. “I...I have to go home now!” He said, trying to struggle free.
Eric smiled a little more. “Nope, you are staying here with me, I'm not letting you leave just yet.” He gave a smirk, holding him tighter. “As I said, I will give you what you desire deep down whether you want me to or not.” He smiled a bit more. Adam could only stare in disbelief. He was being held here and couldn't leave? He tried hard in his mind to hate the idea and hate Eric for doing it... but he couldn’t, he couldn't hate it no matter how much he tried,.What was going on with him?
The lizard just chuckled a little, pushing Adam's face right into his sweaty belly, his snout fitting snuggly inside his large navel. Adam squirmed a little, trying to break free, feeling a strange pleasure from being forced in the lizards belly. After a few seconds, he let Adam go again, but still kept him close.
Eric smiled a bit, getting up, holing the katishi in his arms. “It's getting late, I think it's about time we went to bed tonight, we can help you live your fantasies tomorrow.” He said as if talking to a youngling. Adam didn't fight or protest, only sitting there in his arms. As the lizard walked into his room, he set the katishi down on the bed, smiling a little. “Now, I need to make sure you don't run away.” He said, winking as he climbed onto the bed as well. At first Adam was confused, but realization dawned on him when he saw Eric climbing on top of him, right over him at the moment. Adam couldn't help but blush a little as he saw the lizard come down on him. The lizard, lying on Adam, pinning him down under his tremendous bulk. Adam's face was smooshed right in the lizards soft chest, his enormous belly holding down the rest of Adam's entire torso, down to his knees, Eric's huge hips and thighs doing a good job of keeping his legs down. “Comfy down there?” He chuckled, bouncing a little on the katishi. The huge lizard had been lying his weight on Adam, and was pretty satisfied, Adam was still not sure, he didn't want to like it, but couldn't help the way he felt. Eventually the lizard fell asleep, snoring above him. It was actually kind of nice, he had almost 800 pounds of lizard on him, but it was very soft and warm under there, like the best blanket ever. Adam eventually fell asleep as well, not able to stay awake any longer.

The next day, Adam woke up to find that he did not have Eric lying on top of him anymore. Adam soon enough got up out of bed. It took a few moments to remember where he was, but once he did, he quickly got up and went to the bedroom door. As he stepped closer, he had wondered where on earth Eric had gone.
His questions was soon answered. The door swung open to reveal the giant lizard, coming inside, holding a drink and eating a breakfast pastry. “Oh, hey there. I'm back.” He smiled a bit. “Were you trying to escape?” He asked with a sly smirk, once he finished the pastry. Eric had grabbed Adam and taken him back to the bed. “Sorry, but you need to learn to accept what you love, and I'm going to teach you to do that.” He said, holding him down.
Adam sighed, finding himself being held down by a bigger and stronger creature. “I appreciate that you think you are helping me, but I can take care of myself, alright?” He said, trying to push away.
Eric tsked a bit, shaking his head. “Oh, you have so much to learn my friend.” He said with a smile, climbing up, but not to lay down on him this time. Instead, as he was over him, he decided to sit down. His huge ass covered from Adam's chest, to his thighs. The lizard was crushing him under his bulk and heavy flab. Adam kept sinking into the bed more and more. “Oh, don't act like you don't like this.” He said, smiling a little as he put a hand on his belly. “I just had a very big breakfast, tons of pancakes, eggs, bacon, waffles, toast, muffins, and more.” He smiled a little, jiggling his huge belly, a bit more firm, but still soft and doughy. “Now you get to enjoy my full form in all it's glory. How exciting for you huh?” He chuckled a little. He smiled a bit, starting to bounce, happily squishing Adam under his weight.
Adam groaned softly as he tried to squirm, but in all honesty, this was the most amazing thing he had ever experienced. He loved it, even if he couldn't admit it to even himself. Eric heard his belly groan a little before jiggling it a little. “Brace yourself.” He said before clenching his fists. A second later, a huge fart ripped right out of his butt. It was very hot, right on his body. “Ah, sorry about that little guy, when I have to fart, I just can't hold it in.” He said, chuckling as he started to pat his huge, kind of sweaty belly. “Ah, I need a drink.” He said, leaning forward to grab is drink. As he leaned forward, Adam found his face being smooshed right into the lizards giant gut, it completely squishing him. As the lizard pulled back, he sighed, looking down at Adam who was free again. “Oh my, did you like that? Hmm...” He thought for a moment before smiling broadly, inching forward a bit on Adam’s chest. He picked up his giant belly as he came forward, until it was looming right over Adam’s face, he staring at it's underside. “How about your face becomes a cushion for my magnificent belly.” He smiled, jiggling his belly a little over Adam's face. Eric certainly took his time to tease Adam as much as he could, jiggling his lard and such. “I think it's time to stop stalling.” He said, grinning. After a few second, he let his belly drop. He let go of it as it came down with a wet slap on Adam's face. He was smothered under the moist mound of flesh sitting upon his face. He was trapped under there, the belly resting on his face until Eric moved it. It was very sweaty under there, adding to the powerful musk that he stewed in. Eric's belly was so big, that most wouldn't even notice Adam's head was resting under it.
After a few more seconds, Adam felt the wet flesh peel away from his skin, watching as the belly was held up over his face. “Heh, wow you feel good down there, I should use your face as a pedestal for my belly all the time.” He laughed. Though something he did would seem rude, or something, Adam could tell, he was not being mean at all. He was simply having fun, doing something they both enjoy, whether he would admit it or not.
Eric chuckled a bit. “That was fun, maybe we should do it again!” He said, looking under his belly for a moment to see Adam's face, chuckling a little. “Hey, it's like a magic trick. Now you see him...” He dropped his belly down, smothering the katishi's face again, covering up his entire head. “Now you don't!” He laughed some more, chuckling, leaning forward and adding some more weight on top of Adam. Adam was starting to feel.... aroused, almost turned on. He was starting to realize just how deep this desire may actually be. He loved the way Eric would lift his belly up, just to drop it on his face again. He loved being smothered under his lard, and trapped in his musky crevice. Eric did this some more, almost ten times total before finally stopping and giving him a break, scooting back so he belly was just under Adam's chin again. “You have to admit, that is pretty fun.” He chuckled.
Adam looked up, blushing a little. He had never felt so aroused in his life. He could only look up at the giant lizard who was sitting on him, completely at his mercy for anything he wanted to do with him. It was a surprisingly good feeling, to be at his mercy. Maybe this was right after all. Maybe he actually does like it.
Eric grinned, grinding his hips down on the katishi, not hard but still hard enough. “I see you are starting to like it, aren't you?” He said, looking down into the katishi's nervous eyes. “But we aren't one yet, I want you to enjoy this, a lot.” He said, smiling a little, getting up and turning around, wiggling his rump a little before grabbing the waist of his pants, slowly and teasingly stripping down to a tight pair of underpants. Adam blushed deep, watching him as he stripped down. “Ah, this feels much better~” He teased, wiggling his huge rear Adam's way, it jiggling a bit. They looked rather old and worn. Adam could not take his eyes off of it.
The huge lizard smirked, coming closer. “Well, you seem to like my belly, but maybe you like my ass to. Care to find out.” He said turning around and presenting his rear again. This time it was right in Adam's face. “Care to be my cushion little guy?” He asked as if it was normal everyday question. Adam did not protest, he didn't even try to. Eric decided that was a yes if anything else. “Alright, good luck.” He said, slowly lowering his rump down. Adam watched as it got bigger and bigger, soon the end of his snout touching it. Soon enough he just sat down, Adam was buried deep in his cheeks, both easily bigger than his head. “How's that feel katishi?” He asked, rubbing his tail hole all over Adam's face. It was very musky under there, the scent of sweat and even flatulence hanging around. Adam had felt his euphoria levels grow very high. Eric smiled a little, rubbing his own belly which groaned. “Hope you don't mind a bit of gas down there.” He said.
Eric had pressed on his pudgy belly, gas being pushed down to his bowels. A few second later, his anus ha opened up, a huge load of gas being blasted out. It smelled of rotten eggs mostly, the stench had burned Adam's nose a little, and his eyes watered. The gas had no where else to go, so Adam was trapped under the lizard with it. The thin cloth of his underwear did not help much to block the stench. Adam was left under there to marinate in the stench. “Ah, that felt good don't you think?” He smiled, proceeding to fart some more. They were nothing in sound, and length, but in smell, they were terrible. Most wouldn't be able to bear it. Adam was actually doing quite well under there, it was nothing too bad to him, even if it would be terrible to others. Eric would chuckle, feeling Adam's head almost squished right in between his huge cheeks. He would eventually move sometimes to give him some air, he wouldn't want to hurt the little guy too much.
This went on for about half an hour, before Eric decided the katishi had had enough. Eric lumbered off of his face, lying down next to him on the bed this time, not on him. “That was fun, huh katishi?” He smiled a little, wrapping an arm around him again, holding him close. He hadn't showered since last night so his armpit still was pretty musky. Adam didn't squirm, he didn't fight, he didn't resist at all anymore. He enjoyed himself so much, he did like it. There was no use denying it anymore. This was how he wanted to live his life, it was how he wanted to be.
Eric knew he had succeeded. “So, remember talking about us both needing someone... do you want to be... each others someone?” He asked, pulling the katishi up, laying him on his huge, soft belly.
Adam blushed a little, smiling. “Y-yes... I would like that very much...” He smiled a little, feeling the lizard hug him tight. “T-thank you so much... this is so amazing... how did you know?” He asked, still confused about that part.
Eric just smiled. “I just do.” He said, chuckling before pulling the katishi closer. Without another word he kissed the katishi. Adam had not had a problem with it, kissing back. Soon, he rolled over, lying on top of Adam now, who's head was the only thing poking out from under his girth. “I think we are going to have great fun together.” He smiled, kissing him on the forehead this time.
Adam just smiled and nodded. He finally found what he enjoyed so much, he could stop hiding it, he had someone to share it with. He was truly, genuinely happy. Everything in his life, all those dull, boring routines just took a change for the better.

A Huge Crush (critique requested)

Windwaker407

This story is a lot different than the ones I used to have. I had lost contact with my mate awhile back, and haven't been able to see him in a long time. I was doing an rp, and someone made a character that reminded me of him. I thought that maybe I could help myself cheer up about losing him by writing a story that is sort of largely inspired by him. It is longer than most of my stories because it was so important to me. I really miss him a lot, but this helped for now. It is my first time writing something like this so tell me what you think. I would really like critic.

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