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Falling by Wildbach (critique requested)

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Falling (critique requested)

Wildbach

Part of a growing project, its intended to appear like a guy falling from orbit onto a planet, I still have a way to go, most people dont get what it is unless I explain it, which is never good.

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    UnregisteredCat

    If youre falling, wouldnt the way your body is shaped cause you to fall back with your view to the sky, falling back first? I bet if you made the silhouette of the arms/hands with the sky being shown it would read easier :3

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    UnregisteredCat

    The way you drew it it looks like the character is flying up away from the planet this way. Like a tragic backwards space marine

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      Wildbach

      The furry force appeared and he said nope.