I'll admit, I'm a bit hesitant to submit this. Anyways, in case you wanted a little summary before reading through the whole thing, the general story line is that I'm off at a friend's house for a party of sorts, and something happens; something that is far from ordinary.

I'd like to say I'm getting better at writing, but your opinion would be nice. Did the story flow well? Could I have added anything to make it better? Or something else? Leave a comment with your thoughts, and I'll be sure to read it!

And just in case somebody's thinking it, no, this isn't supposed to be any sort of origin story for my fursona.