Got some helpful critique on my last piece, so I decided to see what I could do to improve the work. This is more experimental than anything, so I'm not really concerned with the little bit of clashing there is between traditional coloring and digital editing; more than anything, I was focusing on the line work, and how I managed the single-point perspective and vanishing point.
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S'better. The open cupboard door might still be out of line, but the smallest of changes has helped perspective.