Cuddles by Vocol (critique requested)

Cuddles (critique requested)

Vocol

2 February 2014 at 11:56:56 MST

KingApollo and I are doing this challenge. We aren't fallowing the rules of "30 Days" but simple doing every other one on the list. I am evens and she is odds.

Here's the challenge: http://30dayotpchallenge.deviantart.com/journal/30-Day-OTP-Challenge-LIST-325248585
Here's the 1st piece: http://kingapollo.deviantart.com/art/Holding-hands-30-day-OTP-challenge-429838478

This was so much fun! I love how there is no lines and how it looks soft... I want to improve with this style and make the shapes of the body parts more noticeable at some point. Tips and pointers are appreciated though, I will not be touching up this picture with the tips, I will use those with the next challenge I do.

Mugen, red haired boy, belongs to @KingApollo
Outlaw, brown haired boy, belongs to @Vocol
You do not have my or :KingAppollo:'s permission to use either of these characters or this picture in any way shape or form. Do not trace or copy.

Critiques please, be nice though.
Also, if you don't like Yaoi or boy love, please don't flame me just move on.

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