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My final commission for now.
This is for manabu who's been incredibly patient in waiting while I've been trying to get other crap in my life settled. Along with Jerry the wolf.
I terribly need to practice my humans more. shivers I'm getting better with fur though.
While listening to- Pompeii by Adrian Leibich
Chars©Manabu & JR-Wolf
Art©AlyssaV./14
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Thank you very much.
Yes, I did struggle much with the perspective. I'll have to practice more with it. Same with scale.
Thank you very much for the critique! Much appreciated :)
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This is fantastic! :) Really nice job on all the details and lighting.
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Thank you very much! I get very nervous when it comes to shadowing and lighting. :)
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It looks amazing! Such details c:
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Kelushan
o3o Oh wow thats beautiful!
I think over all its amazing. The water, the lighting, the reflections, the city on the horizon, perfect.
As for things that seem somewhat off, the perspective for the dock seems slightly off, like its angled down more like a declining ramp.
The boat in the mid ground also seems to be too small for how close it seems.
All together, I don't think these factors take away too much from the picture, the dock is a bit distracting given its angle but I feel as though the amount of detail on the lighting makes up for that.