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Quadrensis by Vet (critique requested)

Quadrensis (critique requested)

Vet

Just wanted to put my first year film up since not many have seen it, and there's no clear record of it online. Did it in 3 weeks on Flash CS5.

This is kid of a concept idea or snippet of each of my four film ideas: Water, Earth, Fire, and Air.

I see all the little flaws, such as:

  • Heads aren't really animated because of lack of time and experience.
  • Some of the run cycles look iffy
  • The body doesn't look too coherent or wobbles in size
  • Little orange dot when the Earth guy makes his chalk stairs

I'm working on Water and Fire this year. Last year I worked a tad on Earth, and Next year I plan to finish Earth and Fire. Or Air and Fire.

Music is Ensis [album is Heartcode] by Disasterpeace (worked on FEZ), who also sound mixed his music to fit my film. He'll possibly be working on Water or Fire!

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    I really like this, it's clear you have a very solid set of skills with animation and have studied lots. :3