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Chapter 1 by TwilightHunterB (critique requested)
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Transmission received on 12 October 2045, 11.49 P.M.
Hello? Is this thing on? *tapping noises*
Hey! Is this th- Oh, never mind, it's fine. Ahem.
*rustling sounds*
We've successfully raided the location, no evidence of illegal activity within building, now moving on to the basement floors for further investigation. As of yet, the building seems abandoned, with no signs of life. I have to admit, it's a little unnerving, it being all quiet and stuff.
Ahem, either way, we've sent a squad down to investigate, but I don't think there'll be much in the way of evidence. If you ask me, it's just an old, run-down building. I'd be surprised if they-
*shouting in background, clearly audible gunshots*
What thOHGODOHGODOHGODGETITOFFGAHHHHHHH-
(AUDIO CUT OFF FOR 9 MINUTES)
(AUDIO RESUMES AT 12.01 A.M.)
...Hmm? What's this then?
Huh. Where's it dialed t- Ohh...
Well, I'll be damned! Just the people I was looking for! So, did you like my trap? Clever, wasn't it? Hold your applause, I know.
Anyway, don't you worry your little corporate asses; they're fine.We'll send 'em back to you once we've patched them up, though I can't really vouch they'll be fine through and through. Might need to give a few of them a psyche test or something, but they'll be fine.
I really wished they'd put up a little bit more of an actual fight, y'know? Might wanna work on your training programs a little-
*loud thud*
Oh! you don't look too well, wanna say hi?
*strained gurgles*
I think he was your radio guy, eh? "Sergent Bello". Nice name, my friend! Now, you know it wasn't very smart to do this, radio them before you were done, right?
*gurgles*
Well, don't worry, Bello, Aida'll patch you up niiiice and quickly, okay?
*frantic gasps*
Hmm. Broken jaw, might need some work. Aida! You mind?
*door sounds*
Thank you. now, be gentle with him, all right? Wouldn't want another accident on our hands now, do we? Thanks.
So, now that you're no doubt listening well and proper, I think it's time you guys learnt something. you're listening, tight? Because I'm not gonna repeat myself, unless this is recorded, in which case, I'll be repeating myself a lot. But I digress.
So, you guys think you can take us on? You think, with all the cutting-edge technology you've got going for you, you think we'll just drop dead?
Well, you're wrong.
Oh, so VERY wrong.
I hope we've learnt something today.
(TRANSMISSION ENDED AT 12.11 A.M.)
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LET'S ALL MAKE FUN OF THE GOVERNMENT!
*sigh* Haven't gotten into writing for a long while. It's nice to be back!
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