-Predator: Burn- by Traconian

-Predator: Burn-

Traconian

22 March 2014 at 23:47:40 MDT

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    Hah, i remember that guy! And his brother too

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      Yea XD I looooove that fanfic~! Adore it with a passion

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        Man, i understand you very much XD This fanfic was so much fun! I loved moment when Lex said in yautja "Fuck you" and showed middle finger XD It one of AvP fanfics that made to start writing my own! XD

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          Gosh yea xD I loved that part the most, I also love ol Xeira quite a bit. I like that element of the aged queen :3

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            Oh yeah, Xeira was indeed awesome! I think she was even more than just a Queen. She was an Empress. I also loved that rodeo scene. XD Slightly bitchy, but in a good way look around, hoping Xiera didn't hear me XD
            And, please, don't think bad about me, i'm just wondering how good i'm doing with my AvP fic. I dream of creating something as awesome as Haven, Unexpected emotions and Subtle Threat X)
            https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10204424/1/New-Nightmare

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              The fic is good xD but it could use some work. I am haaaardly the person to know just where to help though xD;; but I do like it. Maybe if you reread it you'll find a better way to explain situations. I like you are trying to toss in detail than just dialogue (I have read a few fics that are pure dialogue......) so you are on the right track :3 just practice and you'll definitely have something

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                Thank you) And i know... Anyway, i will update chapters from time to time, making those more detailed and etc XD English is my second language that's why it may be hard for me to explain some situations =)
                Also, if you could provide an example, what situation is in need of better explaination? :3

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                  ah if its you're second language then you're doing pretty good xD n uhm..I honestly don't know. I dunno what should be better explained or what shouldn't be xD;;I'm not a good critique when its comes to written things...

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                    Okay, let's try this. What sutiation would you like to be more detailed? :3
                    May be not so good. I've been studying English since i was 4-5. now i'm 20.

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                      high action areas I tend to have a bit more detail though...or setting the scene. I honestly not too sure xD I am normally pretty detailed in my own writing...constantly. I can be so detailed to the point I'm even gagging on the more nasty creatures and people I am describing xD