The Long Walk Home.

And nobody said anything...

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WildOak on March 23, 2014 at 17:02:50 UTC

Great scene. I love the way it's coloured. Looking at this, it kinda makes me feel like I'm walking down the road with them.
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ECwCkQRhzTrv on March 23, 2014 at 18:59:23 UTC

LOVE the colors and the textures, though on the right, the black lines appear a little blurry in comparison to the clean black lines on the left, and I feel as though it detracts from the piece. Maybe it just needs a rescan?
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  ECwCkQRhzTrv on March 23, 2014 at 19:03:12 UTC
  
  Oh whoops, I forgot to go into the figures.
  The guy on the right looks a liiittle too thin at the waist; and it may just be the belt but his torso looks elongated. Being a little further down on the road makes him look a LOT larger compared to the guy on the left (since even between 1-2 feet of distance, they're still the same height)
  
  The guy on the left looks better, the only big thing for me is his left foot just sort of stops; I'd work on the perspective of his boot a little more. Hope that helps!!

The Long Walk Home. by total_wad (critique requested)