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The Goldenlea- Deleted Prologue by Threetails

The Goldenlea- Deleted Prologue

Threetails

This was the original prologue for "The Goldenlea," which has existed in some form or another since 2003.

Ultimately, I made the hard decision to cut this prologue because even though it provides a nice amount of back story, it contributes little to the book except to set the tone and explain a few small details.

The back story contained here is pretty much valid for all the books set in this particular world, including "Basecraft Cirrostratus." In fact, it actually explains the significance of Laz's full name Y'Lazde.

I edited this version somewhat to make it more readable. The original first draft was unbearably cumbersome and wandered horribly, and even later drafts digressed too much for comfort.

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