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Seer On The Way by Threetails (critique requested)
I want to be the seer on the way
The one the hero pauses
But only for a moment by,
And does not dwell on obsequy
And genuflect before.
But rather more,
Like a fattened Teiresias
In the asphalt asphodel.
Just a poem I wrote today, trying to express something complicated that prose just couldn't do as elegantly.
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