A Little Warning by Thewhitefoxeffect (critique requested)

A Little Warning (critique requested)

Thewhitefoxeffect

26 March 2016 at 22:23:15 MDT

This was a poem I wrote awhile back while attending my pre-grad college. I thought of this one at my beachfront condo one day while watching the sunrise on the beach.

Seeing that brought memories flooding back. Some painful. In an effort to get my frustrations out, I wrote this short poem. It is really short however, I feel the message is still powerful.

When my college professor found out I like to write poems, he encouraged me to get them published, which I did. This is one of those.

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    Edit:

    Memories are like WRITINGS on the beach.

    I forgot the "s" -.-