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Mocha Doodle 2 by TheLittleScorpio (critique requested)

Mocha Doodle 2 (critique requested)

TheLittleScorpio

Another old Mocha doodle.

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463
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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    Hey there, this is really cute. So since you requested here's a littke critique.

    The pose is interesting, and I think you did a great job. I enjoy the simple yet memorable character design and think you did rather well on their colors.

    I do appreciate how you've pulled color from the environment to inflience the characters base colorm

    Mm, I'm seeing that it is extremely hard to see the lineart, and the character blends a little too much with the background. A few things could be done for this, a different lineart color (I always experiement with a bunch of different colors) a highlight around some edges to bring out emphasis on the character without changing the lineart color, or changing the background.

    If you do change the backgroubd you may see what I do with the lineart blending.

    Overall this is a cute piece, I like it a lot.