I'M NOT A MAN, OR MACHINE by ThatOneLoser (critique requested)

I'M NOT A MAN, OR MACHINE (critique requested)

ThatOneLoser

23 February 2015 at 05:54:59 MST

I'M JUST SOMETHIN' INBETWEEEEN

Bonnie (C) Scott Cawthon

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    Love it. XD rock on Bonnie!

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    Extra kudos for the Loverboy reference. :3 Nicely done, very good lighting. n..n

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      Thank you. Any tips?

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        Ideally, the lines could be smoother. I'd recommend going over them a second time to smooth out the edges, cos they seem a bit jagged. Also avoid using the line tool on things like the guitar strings - it is, unfortunately, something that stands out pretty plainly. Going over them a second time could help with that, too, though. :)

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        However your colouring style, lighting, and shading are all quite well done, and present a very unique aspect. The shapes you use as well are also very unique, and serve as a style that you may want to explore in more drawings in the future. :)

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    In fact you could say I'm... Lovin' every minute of it. ;P

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    I just realised that replies put the most recent one on top. :T

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      Wait nevermind I just don't know how to internet.