Chapter 9 by tfamonk (critique requested)

Chapter 9 (critique requested)

tfamonk

19 January 2014 at 12:32:54 MST

Chapter 9, and it's the longest one so far! Feel free to leave comments/criticism.

Thanks again to my co-writer Readasaur and our wonderful betaCirceus!

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