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Before the Desert by Televassi (critique requested)

Before the Desert (critique requested)

Televassi

27 June 2015 at 09:56:13 MDT

A short poem, written as a gift for Utunu.
Apparently, I managed to succeed in writing something he liked. xD

Here's what he had to say:
This was a surprise gift poem by my good friend Televassi!

It made me really happy. He's done a perfect job; he knows me too well, and I don't think I could express myself any better than he's done here. It's spot on. I'm surprised he didn't do a mic drop and walk offstage. :)

If you're not already watching him, give him a +watch. He deserves more of them!

Thank you so much, Televassi!

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Literary / Poetry / Lyrics

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    Well, I already said it up in that copy-pasted bit, but thank you. <3

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      You're welcome, of course!

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    Beautiful! I just saw this just now.

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      Aw, that's okay! Glad you like it too! =)