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Quick Edgar Sketches by TinyFoxThing (critique requested)

Quick Edgar Sketches (critique requested)

TinyFoxThing

Yeah, I haven't been drawing often as I want to. Seriously need to work on that. LIKE FO'SERIOUS! Like I'm not even lying. Drew my character Edgar 'cause, well, I don't draw him as much as I want too. ADJECTIVE ACQUIRED!

Also, threw in a   scruffkerfluff in here! I hope he doesn't miiiind~

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    Flagged for critique eh? Let's start Left to right. The pose is unnatural. What is he doing with his hands? Generally people don't stand like that.The eyes feel a little to spaced apart. And the muzzle appears to be very flat. Head looks a bit over-sized for the drawn body

    Next his right arm appears to be shorter than the left one. The posing of the hands/paws is very nice though.

    Next, The twist he is in is over exaggerated and close to impossible making it look unnatural. Also, shoulderblade or ribs. Pick one, not both it looks weird.

    Finally, I spy Scruff style here. I won't comment on the legs for it. The one thing I really notice is the cheek white is in different spots and makes the face look unsymmetrical. it also looks like you gave up on the hands/paws.