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Hands Like Houses by Swings-His-Sword-Sword (critique requested)

Hands Like Houses (critique requested)

Swings-His-Sword-Sword

An old band I used to like a lot.

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Visual / Traditional

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    Oooo~ This is different. Most of your lines are very clean, which is nice. My only problem is the connection with the S and the underline could be a little cleaner. Otherwise, good. Did you do the lettering yourself?

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      Yeah I agree, I couldve made the S and the underline look much better. I didnt really do the lettering myself, this is actually the band's "logo" and I basically just drew it out by sight. All and all I think it came okay for one of my early works, more or less it was like a warmup stencil before I started doing bigger ones which I plan on uploading soon.

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        Oh, that's neat. I was thinking of a way to maybe fix it the other day. Why not make the S (or even the underline) continue? Just a suggestion.
        (Oh crap, my typography instincts are kicking in. Kill it before it gets outta control haha.)

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          I could do that and it actually would look much better, I have no idea what I was thinking at the time lol

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            That's okay! It happens all the time with me. :>