rabbit in space by sushy (critique requested)

rabbit in space (critique requested)

sushy

2 May 2021 at 11:42:46 MDT

I don't draw space ships often and I wanted to change that!

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General
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Visual / Digital

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    My one critique would be that the way the spaceship lines up with the planet on the left (since it's just barely overlapping) makes it look a bit like it's colliding with it! I generally tend to look at alignment in compositions to make sure it's clear the background/midground/foreground are visually discernable :)

    This piece is lovely. I really enjoy the cross-hatched shading, especially in the background combined with the black splotches. It's cool the way the black shading lets some of the colours behind peek out. Good work!

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      ah I see, I didn't think of that. Thank you for your feedback!

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    That looks very cool! :D

    Did you use origami paper for that one planet? :)

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      It is actually wrapping paper from a store :D