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Slender Girl by sushichan (critique requested)

Slender Girl (critique requested)

sushichan

Made with: Colors! 3D (App on the N3DS)

A depiction of "Slender Girl" aka Slender Man's daughter (if he had one)

She pretty much entices you the forest (reverse stalking) and kills you. Great!

Rated 13+ because she's topless under that school girl blazer.

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    I noticed this piece was labeled for critic... the major thing I'd have to say is the anatomy more than anything. Boobs don't naturally stick together/overlap like that. This may sound weird, but one day after a shower or something stand in front of a mirror and just take a really good look at your self. People always say drawing from life is the best way to learn, and you're wearing a perfectly good human body to start from!

    Also, the hand needs more 3D charm. As of now, it sorta looks like noodles; a great way to get past this is to think of the hand as the bones first and then with the skin on top. It's great anatomy practice drawing the bones and then adding skin on top.

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      Really late reply, sorry!

      Thank you! I really have trouble drawing boobs and it's kinda hard to base from real life if you don't have much of those really... I would like to observe someone else's boobs but I think that would label me as a pervert. I'll keep trying though!

      The hand was sort of rushed because I was really getting sick of drawing it but I really wanted to finish it. I know it's a lame excuse, but I'll take your advice. Hey, if you've got more tips on hands, I'd be more than willing to take them since they're such a b**** to draw.

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    Also late reply hahah
    This may sound silly, but the best way to see the woman body in motion is in porn. :I A lot of boobs there are pretty fake, but it's a start definitely, and eventually you should be able to tell the difference.

    Hands well, what I do is I take a video of my own hands and move them around and then I can play it back and stop at certain sections and draw studies from that!