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John Luke & Kieron by Styx (critique requested)

John Luke & Kieron (critique requested)

Styx

Yeah, no creative title here. I’ve just run out I guess.

This… would neither scan nor photograph, and despite my attempts to fix it looks horrifying and nothing like the original. Forgive me. Try to enjoy it anyway.

John Luke on the left belongs to Laughing Cat. Kieron on the right is from my brainmeats. From a novel we’re working on.

There is a lot of body language in this piece that says something about each of them.

John Luke © J. Neidorff

Kieron & Artwork © A. Parker (Styx) 2010

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    Looks to me like the wrinkling on the shirts is way overdone. I realise you may be trying to convey an over-baggy type of style, but they also dpnt appear to hang correctly. Just my two pence.

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      Thank you.