I don't have the original full file of Ryuukin, but here he is: http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq117/rareopaldragon/firstryuukin_zps35ffeb94.jpg
And how I depicted myself: http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq117/rareopaldragon/jumping_zpsb7fdbd18.jpg
And my first sona appearance: http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq117/rareopaldragon/cuttingties_zpsfc3c162a.jpg
Much respect to you for posting old, embarrassing artwork! But truly, everybody has to start somewhere. Hey, maybe we'll see this image again someday in a "Draw it again" meme if you care to post it ;D
I do believe we have never met before. However I want to say keep on drawing and practice more (overused advice I know). My old early high school drawings used to be like this, However I got so much better due to drawing a lot and also drawing from life around me much as possible. Also, try and understand what's under the surface drawing. It's not all about what it look like, but how it works from inside out of the 3-D forms. I have been practicing drawing bat wings couple times and now getting better at it.
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I'll trade ya, wanna see how Ryuukin looked originally? :P