I dunno, personally, I'm not much a fan of mental change in TF, or maybe I'm specifically not cool with a complete override of previous memories and personality--I much prefer a willing blending of new and old, and an acceptance of what just happened. Really, my favorites are willing TFs where the "victim" is better off at the end than the beginning, or even if the TF is unwilling at first, that they accept it at the end. But I really just like it when they like it--just a mirror of my own body dysphoria that draws me to TFs in the first place. But this is a commission, and not about my preferences...so...some of that made it harder to do than it might've otherwise.
So, yeah, here we go, one more page left.