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First Date 20 Questions by sonderjen (critique requested)

First Date 20 Questions (critique requested)

sonderjen

M'lady.

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    appropriate response.

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    Neither holy toller nor hipster he be. So far so good on the first date.

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      Hipsters wear trilbys. 'Nice Guys' wear fedoras and are quite often neckbeard MRAs.

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    Quick Bit of Critique, It's not visually conveyed that the second question is a follow-up to the last. Panel Two, Sara's face is relaxed and listening, but panel three it's more stern and concerned. I'd say the expression in panel two should leer more to what's shown in panel three, if it's just like her eyes narrowed slightly more, eyebrows raised.

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      Makes sense. I'll make sure to adjust it when I do the real page way in the future.

      Thanks for the input!

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    low hanging fruit

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    I'm told that the key factor in a successful relationship isn't the presence of traits that you love about each other, but the absence of traits that you can't stand. If that's true Sara's on the right tack.

    Minor crit: it's 'atheist', not 'athiest'. (More athy than any of us!)

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      I'll fix that eventually. My schedule is out of whack at the moment.

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    I used to have a fedora, it was part of a costume.

    I wore that, sunglasses, and a t-shirt that read "IRS AUDIT AGENT."

    Before you think I'm clever, it was in a Foxtrot cartoon.

    Foxtrot is the Dreamcast of Sunday Funnies. Superior to the others of its generation, largely ignored and forgotten, and it appeared and disappeared before anyone noticed.

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      I can agree with this assessment.