So... yeah... my first ever submission to weasyl... Other than my/Marshcold's awesome pic of my OC, Boom. Ah, such a devilish cat.

Sanctuary is a rough draft, so all of what I'm going to post needs improvement and critiques to make it better. It also features a special type of writing I'd like to call two-person omniscient, where it tells the story between two persons views (One being the brother of good, Gale, and the other being the brother of evil, Brixton). So, I hope you all like this uniqure style of writing.

To tell new viewers the truth, this was a story I wrote on paper about 3 years ago, and I hadn't been able to convert it to digital until now, revamped and redesigned to fit my writing skill as of now. Again, my work needs improvement, but I have to mention I'm still in my mid-teens, so I have a lot of time to improve and I hope people will join me on this journey.

Thank you all, and here's the preview into the next chapter that will or will not come out sooner or later XP:

As we follow our hero/villain, we learn how they have been living since they left their family. Gale, the brother of life, lives with a peculiar young girl who keeps him sane, relieving hi of hyper focusing on his worries. In the meantime, Brixton has already begun his first operation... destroying the city of Gelium, and making a world-wide broadcast to the numerous nations.

And for more goodies, check out my DA: http://jade-of-the-stones.deviantart.com/
Thanks again!