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Blueberry and Zane by SmudgeWaffle33

Blueberry and Zane

SmudgeWaffle33

For KatWolfEclipse's contest thing. I would've submitted to characters but... I dunno lol.

Blueberry is the rabbit, and Zane is Blueberry's snake tail c:

Okay this is a little dark so prepare yourselves.

History: Blueberry started out as a normal rabbit ragdoll, bought by a very loving child named Nicole, or Nikki for short. She had also bought Zane separately. She treated them very well, and loved them. She would have tea parties with them, she would run around with them outside, and made sure to safely wash them if they got dirty. Blueberry and Zane loved Nicole very much. Nicole had a father who was a scientist, one who was mad with love for his daughter. He did anything his daughter wanted, for she never asked for much. (She was not a spoiled child, and she did not act like one.) Her father was always striving to 'improve' her fluffy friends.

The first modification he made to the ragdolls was life. How was this done? Nobody knows for sure. Some believe he harnessed the trio's love to create hearts. Others think he stole the hearts of thieves. No matter, he was able to achieve his goal. There was but one flaw with this; when the ragdolls were cut in anyway, they did not bleed stuffing but bled blood. This wasn't a problem for a while.

Next he stretched Blueberry's arms to create sorta a backpack almost. He now drags his arms behind him. While doing this, he replaced Zane's realistic eyes with orange button eyes nearly identical to Blueberry's. The two constantly cried in pain, so he stitched their mouths shut.

At this point Nicole's heart was getting her heart torn to pieces. She saw only souless eyes and heard only muffled voices, and she got scared. But in her heart she knew her friends were kind and she could never lose them.

The next modification may have been the worst one. Nicole had almost left Zane at a friend's house. He wanted to prevent losing a stuffed animal. So in the middle of the night, Nicole's father stole Blueberry and Zane from her room and took them into the basement, where she wouldn't hear the muffled cries of pain. He tore off Blueberry's fluffy little tail, and cut the tip off of Zane. Next he stitched the two parts together as quickly as possible. Blueberry had his friend as a tail! The bloodstains were so severe that they would not come out. The duo tries to hide those nowadays.

"I'mf tellingf! nicolef willf never forgive youf!" Blueberry screamed at her father with candor and contempt.

Her father feared this. So to prevent speaking, he put a strange metal clamp on Blueberry's neck. It did not prevent speech, but caused unbearable pain.

"If you speak, I will tighten this to the point your head explodes. And as for you Mister. Snake, I will put a clamp around yours and Nicole's. And I'll make you, Rabbit, watch before I kill you."

The two never spoke again.

Nicole's father had gone insane with love.

One day innocent little Nicole tried to talk to her friends, asking them if they felt pain after the operation.

"Don't talk to them honey, they're disoriented from the surgery." Her father assured her.

Nicole didn't listen. When he went out to the store Nicole demanded them the story. The duo described the horrible truth.

Nicole did something surprising. She didn't cry about this treachery. She was simply in shock. After that phase she sent her two best friends away, to escape the treachery of her father.

"I'll be fine, just go. You've given me so much love and only got abuse in return. Run away while you still can, I hope I can repay you in the future!"

So they did.

And Nicole, as they found out, was not fine.

And they vowed to never speak again.

And only to speak through their good deeds.

To make the world a better place.

For Nicole.

:EDIT: Forgot to add that the horns were added on earlier, so they do not bleed blood c:

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    Btw this was written so well that I almost cried at the end! XP Such a great story!!

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      Oh gawd no this is terrible XD *Throws tissue box at you*

      But thanks anyways <3

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        Welll if this is bad then what is good? is it like in Heaven or something?! XD Im Always excited to read ANY of your stoof!

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    Seeeeeeee? Look at dat story. Amazing. -Finally something from you didn't make me cry lol-

    Picture's awesome. I like how creepy they look eue

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      WHAT BUT WHAT- The story's terrible I didn't even use good vocabulary D:

      But thanks bro eue Glad I pulled off the creepy feel~

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        BUT STILL YOU WRITE BETTER THAN ME

        No problemo bro~