Black Rabbit-Ch.2 by SkyPaint (critique requested)

Black Rabbit-Ch.2

as the rabbit awakens in the middle of the night.

to find himself scanning over the look of his room. still the same wooden walls wooden floor.

such a petty little Shack. as he thinks in Malice towards the room.

besides from that only a bed and a. crate for a table.

as the rabbit hops out of bed. to land face first on the floor.

as only one thought enters his mind. I'm burning that mattress and getting a real bed.

as he mutters to himself. oh wait I don't have the money.

as an instant he finds himself looking upwards towards the open door. deceive the butler standing there.

as the butler asks. would you like a hand up. my young Lord.

as he responds with a snap. no you idiot. if I cannot stand on my own feet. how can I call myself a monster.

I did not expect any less. well then I will be off then goodnight. my young Lord.

as he stands up and says in hesitation. wait a second... can you stay here tonight. there's a draft in your room and I don't need you getting sick. everything else is already going to hell. I don't need your health turning out the same way.

as the butler replies. alright then I will stay. as he goes over swiftly picking up the bunny and a swirling motion.

as the bunny says in a dizzy voice. I wanted a butler not a ballerina.

as the dizziness wears off. he found himself already under the covers.

as he gets distracted by the look of his nightgown white is such a obnoxious color. I would rather it be black not white. maybe even pink would be better than white and I don't like pink. pulling on the color of the nightgown. but then he gets distracted by his Butler sitting down on the mattress.

as the butler says. what type of bedtime story do you want to hear.

in a instant the rabbit looks towards him. and yells I might be 7 but I don't need to hear those Kiddush bedtime stories.

find then I guess we will not have a bedtime story. even if it is not Kiddush. the butler says in a teasing voice.

find then the rabbit says Crossing its arms. but to see the butler is already fell asleep.

but against the rabbits well he fell asleep as well.

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as the rabbit here's. awaken my young Lord it is morning. and I prepared your breakfast.

in an instant the rabbit bolts upward in bed. to see that it is chocolate chip pancakes and milk.

the rabbit grabs the glass of milk and then one Swig drinks it all down. and then slowly grabs the plate of two chocolate chip pancakes.

as the butler says to him. you have a letter from someone called toriel my young Lord. or should I say chocolate as the butler smiles.

the rabbit nearly chokes on his pancakes a letter from toriel. and then he realizes the butler called him that name. don't call me chocolate. as he snaps in a annoyance.

after finishing up the pancakes he opens the letter. to see that's been written on lined paper and it says.

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dear chocolate.
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I invite you and your butler. over this evening for tea. I hope to see you at
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12. and it would be a pleasure to speak to both of you. and there would be
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butterscotch pie.
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Love's Toriel
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as the butler approaches you seem to have finished your breakfast may I take the plate.

as the rabbit says distracted okay yes as he hands over the plate and the glass.

well then let's get you ready for today as the butler says with a smile.

in one hand the glass and the plate the other hand the clothing.

as the butler swiftly leaves the room and comes back without the plate and the glass.

the first thing removed was the nightgown. as from that the red with three black stripes sweatshirt was put on first. to follow next was grey pants. has the butler asks are you certain you do not want socks or shoes.

yes I am certain. it squeezes My Feet paws. so then let's go Ciel. he replies.

I knew it would not be that hard to say my name. Ciel says with a smile.

shut up he says looking away in embarrassment.

as he gets up let's go. walking as fast as possible out of the room.

walking through the hallway in the living room that both have nothing in them. besides from a flustered rabbit. causing the butler to rush after him.

Black Rabbit-Ch.2 (critique requested)

SkyPaint

10 December 2016 at 09:18:06 MST

undertale Black Butler crossover

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